tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3071412204587153507.post900549095579660168..comments2009-10-18T05:54:45.488-07:00Comments on Blue Butterfly: StressSSSS!!! Magazine spread layout take 2Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3071412204587153507.post-65696782527323426392009-09-18T21:13:31.343-07:002009-09-18T21:13:31.343-07:00cuz i havent had time to decide which color I woul...cuz i havent had time to decide which color I would use and I didnt mess around with the title and position of graphic and such :P I will try tmore next timeHuyen Creativehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06073233850867660850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3071412204587153507.post-31785480400788822942009-09-18T08:14:13.589-07:002009-09-18T08:14:13.589-07:00Layout needs more air built into it. It looks very...Layout needs more air built into it. It looks very cramped. The graphic cartoon needs to have more dominance in the layout. Same with the headline and subhead. These three items should function as a unit. They are spread out all over the two pages. You have full color to work with - don't forget. Why just red?Professor Nelsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02189350978483609940noreply@blogger.com